COORDINATOR, ashelyn graves

[ashelyn]

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[atrb=valign,top] 19 Female Coordinator Straight Heroes

[atrb=valign,top][atrb=style, border-left:1px solid #515151;] PERSONALITY + Loyal + Friendly + Resourceful + Generous + Sincere - Temper - Passive Aggresive - Vindictive - Blunt - Petty Likes Fire Types Camping Being Outdoors Fishing Sunny Weather Dislikes Water Types Being stuck indoors Rainy Weather Hyprocrites The Cold HISTORY Ashelyn was born in nimbasa city in the unova region. Where she got her darumaka from her parents when she was 13 and deemed old enough by them to travel. She decided to not journey in Unova cause she had heard about contests and she liked the look of them more than pure battling. She decided to travel to Hoenn the home region of contests. She advanced fairly well but her team only had 3 pokemon at this point her Darmanitan, her Blaziken and her Camerupt. She then decided to take some time off of Contests to train. She travelled to Kanto with some mates she made in the contests where she caught her final 3. She started training by herself near mount silver and the other mountains. She returned to unova to help take out Team plasma but by the time she got herself sorted and returned they had already been defeated ever since then she has been training in Twist mountain with her team strengthening them up and perfecting their combinations OTHER Major Fangirl of both Elesa and Tetsu the only region she hasn't been to is Sinnoh but she doesn't plan on going there too soon its too cold for her she hates going to Iccirus city every summer she had to go there for 1 week to see her grandfather POKEMON Becca, Female Arcanine Flash Fire Flame Burst ▸ Take Down ▸ Extremespeed Reversal ▸ Flame Wheel ▸ Heat Wave Samantha, Female Rapidash Flash Fire Flare Blitz ▸ Fire Blast ▸ Inferno Take Down ▸ Flame Charge ▸ Fury Attack Theo, Male Blaziken Speed Boost Sky Uppercut ▸ Brave Bird ▸ Blaze Kick Return ▸ Acrobatics ▸ Attract Tracker, Male Houndoom Flash Fire Inferno ▸ Flamethrower ▸ Crunch Foul Play ▸ Beat Up ▸ Roar Sevia, Female Darminitan Zen Mode Overheat ▸ Superpower ▸ Hammer Arm Belly Drum ▸ Flame Charge ▸ Psychic Volcano, Male Camerupt Solid Rock Eruption ▸ Earthquake ▸ Lava Plume Flame Burst ▸ Yawn ▸ Magnitude IN PC None Kagamine Rin From Vocaloid is Ashelyn Graves THIS CHARACTER IS PLAYED BY *Devlan

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PENDING!

Okay, so I know your character was briefly approved but upon re-evaluation I've decided to move it back to pending due to a few very important matters. Post counts are not important here, but we have a great respect for grammar and punctuation. Using proper capitalisation and basic punctuation - like commas and periods - is not hard. It was taught in basic schooling and the history you have presented here in this application lacks both. You capitalise random words, you use follow-on sentences where it could easily have been divided into two or three, or at least separated using the basic principles of the English language. We have approved two of your previous characters stating similar issues but this time the history is purely unacceptable for our grammatical standards. Also, using numbers instead of words is lazy in an application.

Also, make certain if you're using Rin from Vocaloid that you ONLY use pictures of Rin. Someone else uses Len as a faceclaim so you must be careful not to use their images. Once we have seen the history demonstrated in a more grammatically acceptable way post in the notification thread again and we will re-evaluate this application.

Thank you.

[★ FATE ★]

PENDING!

The history is still grammatically incorrect. There was other things requested in my previous post. I'm unable to accept it due to the grammatical issues.