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Post by DASH UZUMAKI on Feb 16, 2014 1:53:06 GMT 9.5
DASH UZUMAKI | ALIAS WHISKERS | GENDER MALE | AGE EIGHTEEN | DATE OF BIRTH APRIL 5TH | ETHNICITY CAUCASION | SEXUALITY PANSEXUAL | CLASS TRAINER | ALIGNMENT LAWFUL GOOD |
| PERSONALITY Dash likes to think he's a regular casanova with the ladies and always takes the chance to admire a beautiful girl when he sees one. Still as much as he enjoys it it often just depresses him making him long for something more meaningful. He is an orphan and feeling like a nobody this is the main reason he set out on his journey initially to gain the respect and attention he felt he deserved in order to finally become a somebody. Suffering a horrible defeat at the league though he was forced to open his eyes and reevaluate himself deciding it was time to make some changes in his life. He has the utmost respect and admiration for his parents especially his father who faced off with criminals many times. Dash lives his life day by day without a real solid future in mind yet beyond having a nice girl by his side to spend time with and just enjoy life with. He really loves to battle what trainer doesn't really. He has a deepest connection with his pokemon Delphox named Kurama, who refuses to stay in his pokeball when he's in a sour mood about something. Dash really has an unhealthy obsession with strawberry cheesecake and always buys some whenever he stops in some town. Dash really doesn't like pessimists and especially dislikes ghost pokemon they just freak him out. He hates stuck-up people who think they are better than everyone else. | | POKEMON Sparky, Female Mouse Pokemon Static, Lightning Rod
Thunderbolt ▸ Discharge Feint ▸ Light Screen Agility ▸ Thunder |
Kurama, Male Fox Pokemon Blaze, Magician
Will-o-Wisp ▸ Psychic Giga Impact ▸ Hyper Beam Fire Blast ▸ Mystical Fire |
Guy Lee, Male Ninja Pokemon Torrent, Protean
Ice Beam ▸ Surf Haze ▸ Hydro Pump Dark Pulse ▸ Water Shuriken |
Kakashi, Male Predator Pokemon Intimidate, Reckless
Aerial Ace ▸ Fly Take Down ▸ Agility Brave Bird ▸ Double Team |
Leafa, Female Verdant Pokemon Leaf Guard, Chlorophyll
Sunny Day ▸ Solarbeam Razor Leaf ▸ Leaf Blade Rock Smash ▸ Energy Ball |
Shadow, Female Illusion Fox Pokemon Illusion
Shadow Ball ▸ Shadow Claw Dark Pulse ▸ Agility Night Slash ▸ Night Daze |
IN PC | [b]NARUTO SHIPPUDEN[/b] Uzumaki Naruto | Uzumaki Dash PLAYED BY NARUTO |
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Post by ★ FATE ★ on Feb 19, 2014 19:22:29 GMT 9.5
PENDING! Hi there, Naruto! Welcome to AT! We're glad to have you but there are a few issues with your application that you'll need to fix before we can accept your character.
First of all are the similarities to an existing canon. We understand finding inspiration from characters in other series, but having such striking likenesses (as well as the same name, same faceclaim and a lot of the same personality traits and likes) is something we really discourage here at Anxiety Trials. It's listed as one of our big nonos in our rules for applying, so if you could rework his name and personality a little if you want to use Naruto as your faceclaim, that would be wonderful.
Seccondly, alternate and shiny colourings are not permitted except on an event basis or when canonically so within our site. The Pokemon you have that are different colourings will have to be changed back to those that are their original. We also rather that the Pokemon in the PC are the mini-sprite version of themselves just so they don't appear to be part of the main party.
Once these things have been altered, feel free to post again in the notification thread and we'll re-evaluate your application.
Thanks!
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Post by DASH UZUMAKI on Feb 19, 2014 23:59:49 GMT 9.5
alright so removed the two shinies and changed PC to mini sprites. secondly changed naruto to dash and editted personality so hope is fine now.
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Post by ★ FATE ★ on Feb 23, 2014 21:03:21 GMT 9.5
PENDING! Unfortunately I am still a little torn about this character. His fear of ghosts, his perverted nature and his love of ramen all hit a little too close to home from the canon version of Naruto (and that's just stuff I've gleaned from reading his personality on the Naruto wiki) and we really celebrate originality here. I'd really like to see a character completely different from it's faceclaim. With so few traits listed all I see are the basic outlines from the canon Naruto and I really want to see more personalisation when using a faceclaim that is different from the original.
Also, if you could change your username to be all caps, FIRSTNAME LASTNAME and the title of your thread to be TRAINER, firstname lastname as stated in our rules. Once you've reworked it, I'll be happy to have another look. :3
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Post by DASH UZUMAKI on Feb 25, 2014 0:07:35 GMT 9.5
alright changes made
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